death korps of krieg story

this is a short story i wrote for a mod team for dawn of war, the mod is based on the deat korps of krieg that can be found at forge world the mod team can be found at [link]
the mission idea i had was for a hill top defence were the player commanded a battery of support weapons and assitsted the front line troops. any ideas on this mission idea thank you please comment.

well it is yelling at me about a preview for a story it is not posting hmm her is the story:

“The day had held so much promise too.”
Crash!
Since shortly after sunrise the 102 support company has held hill 32 and supported the hasty trench line in front of it. The day was just starting and the enemy tanks and troops just kept pouring in.
“D! Tank battalion just rolled ov…
“New coordinates 011-43-…
Boom!
“Left flank, pour it on 102nd!
Ra at tat tat!
Enemy small arms fire cut through the B and D teams. F team responded rapidly with their heavy bolters slamming shot hard into the enemy advancing up the hill.
“56-9883, slam it home men!”
Boom boom boom boom!
A cheer went up among the men on the front line as the Earth Shaker and Medusa rounds fell into the enemy almost on top of R and H infantry companies dug in up front. The cheer was short lived as the first of the enemy stepped foot on the top of the hill B D and F in full retreat. Weapons swiveled to meat the new challenge.
Thunk thunk thunk!
C team was first to unload their auto cannons into the enemy shortly fallowed by G team’s heavy stubbers. Some men where so bewilder by the sudden attack they forgot there heavy weapons in favor of their las rifles and knifes. The amount of fire was so staggering that all the enemy solders that were past the crest of the hill were killed, some even flung off the hill and into the air. No more enemies appeared over the hill in the lull of shooting a low rumbling sound was heard. With renewed vigor the enemy poured back into the line of fire but this time added by a tank brigade. Shots exploded from both forces at a dangerously close range.
“Crap!” sergeant Hickory of H team yelled,” I want these las cannons turned around now!”
Explosions were now going off all around the top of the hill, the men of the infantry companies had taken notice and wanted to help but were pined down by the wave of enemy troops and tanks coming in after the bombardment that had ceased moments before when the hill came under assault.
Sergeant hickory had taken refuge behind a group of stones with three other men still firing into the masses coming over the hill. Sergeant hickory turned around to look down the hill and was filled with joy. There below them and coming up the hill fast was two more infantry companies and one of the famed Almand Fengor armored company.
The first men hit the crest of the hill and formed up behind it, unloading into the exposed enemy on top of the hill. Tanks of all makes thundered over the crest past Hickory and continuing onward to crush the enemy.
The men of the 102nd regained the hill and had very short time to recover their weapons and defenses before orders flowed in from the front requesting support batteries firing, anti tank here, anti troop there! Hickory thought to him self.
“The day had held so much promise too.”
Boom, rat at, rat at tat tat!
“coordinates 113-581…”

sorry for the crapness